Hello! could you please have a look to the mistakes? thanks a lot?

In an immediate future, shopper can buy their good with just a wave of the arm.


Indeed, a microchip will be injected in the arm and it will contain all the information about identity, bank details, payment..., each chip has a ten-digit code.





Incredible! But this proceed was already used in cats, dogs and horses or in cattle and sheep, consumers can follow the food from farm to plate.


This proceed was already use in a club in Barcelona, clients doesn’t need to take a wallet or a purse; they pay with a microchip implanted in the arm offers by the club.





Another method witch will be use in the supermarket is the Iris recognition and the fingerprint.





The advantages are paying swiftly and help to prevent card or identity fraud and mugging. Also used to help to combat drug counterfeiting.





A research released has been done by the institute for grocery distribution, and we could determine that more teenagers than adults would be willing to use this proceed, certainly because they less worry about the protecting privacy life.

Hello! could you please have a look to the mistakes? thanks a lot?
hello there! just to let you know the corrections are in capital letters:





In THE immediate future, shoppers can buy their GOODS with just a wave of the arm. Indeed, a microchip will be injected in the arm and THIS will contain all the information about THEIR identity, bank details, payments etc. Each chip has a ten-digit code.





Incredible! But this process was already PRACTICED on cats, dogs and horses or in cattle and sheep; consumers can follow the food from farm to plate (this bit is incorrect and doesn't make any actual sense, you need to rephrase this).


this PROCESS was already USED AT a club in Barcelona, clients don't need to take a wallet or a purse; they pay with the HELP OF a microchip already implanted in the arm.





Another method, which will be USED/UTILISED in supermarkets, is Iris recognition and fingerprint SCANNING.





the advantages are paying swiftly and THIS helps to prevent card or identity fraud and mugging. IT IS also used to help combat drug conterfeiting.





RESEARCH that has ALREADY been CONDUCTED and RELEASED by the Institute for Grocery Distribution, and HENCE we could PREDICT for OURSELVES that more teenagers, RATHER THAN adults would be willing to MAKE USE of this PROCESS, PARTICUARLY AS they less LIKELY to worry about protecting THEIR PRIVACY.





i am no english tutor but i did the best i could. hope this helps! do double check this though and i'd also advise you to go through this with your college tutor or university lecturer. because they would know how to write a good essay or know how to write well academically. as well as be able to spot these mistakes.





keep studying and work hard, as ever!!
Reply:It is a good idea, one that had crossed my mind a while ago but as long as it would not become a government issued microchip at birth with every detail from bank tax paid and registering where you go and what you do like identity cards.





Another good idea which is available but I have not yet seen used is RFID (radio frequncy identification) in the supermarkets for their customers. This is when each item bears an RFID tag and as you take it of the shelf and put it in your basket it registers the cost on your bill and updates stock control so when you go to the check out your bill i waiting for you and all you do is pay it - no taking everything out of the basket and putting it back to get it to your car.





RFID is used a lot on the logistics side by supermarkets and other industries
Reply:Id be up for that, as long as what i buy is not collected then sold on to other companys.
Reply:Hope this helps!








In the immediate future, shoppers can buy their goods with just a wave of the arm.


Indeed, a microchip will be injected in their arms which will contain information about their identity, bank details, payment etc.Each chip will hold a ten-digit code.





IT may sound incredible but this procedure has already been used in cats, dogs, and horses. Indeed with its use in cattle and sheep, consumers could follow the food almost from the farm to their plate!


This procedure is already used in a club in Barcelona.Clients don't need to take a wallet or a purse. The club offers them the choice of paying via a microchip implanted in their arm.


Another method which will be used in supermarkets is Iris Recognition and Fingerprint Recognition.





There are several advantages; swift payment time,helping to combat card and identity fraud, plus less risk of being mugged. It is also being mooted as a means of combating drug counterfeiting.





Research released by the Institute for Grocery Distribution,postulates that more teenagers than adults would be willing to use this procedure. This appears to be because they have less concern over privacy issues.
Reply:In (anx) the immediate future, shopper(s) canx (will be able to ---is better)buy their good(s) with just a wave of the arm.


Indeed, a microchip will be injected in the arm and it will contain all the information about identity, bank details, payment..., each chip has a ten-digit code.





really you should say "in fact"--it is not injected--it is implanted





Incredible! But this proceed was already used in cats, dogs and horses or in cattle and sheep, consumers can follow the food from farm to plate.


This proceed was already use in a club in Barcelona, clients doesn’t need to take a wallet or a purse; they pay with a microchip implanted in the arm offers by the club.





more mistakes-but the main one is it is a process--not a proceed





Another method witch will be use in the supermarket is the Iris recognition and the fingerprint.





"which "is spelt wrong--it is eye--recognition not iris





The advantages (of this) are paying swiftly(swift payment) and(,also to ) help (tox)prevent card or identity fraud and mugging. Also used to help to combat drug counterfeiting.--be better if you listed it with colons and commas-- too wordy for littlre information





A research released has been done by the institute for grocery distribution, and we could determine that more teenagers than adults would be willing to use this proceed, certainly because they less worry about the protecting privacy life. grammer mistakes--


main fault--proceed--is process--


thats all i'm doing--hope it helps--cheers
Reply:hi,





find below the corrected one ( caps)





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In THE immediate future, shopper can buy their GOODS with just a wave of the arm.


Indeed, a microchip will be injected in the arm and it will contain all the information about identity, bank details, payment..., each chip has a ten-digit code.





Incredible! But this TECHNOLOGY was already used in cats, dogs and horses or in cattle and sheep, consumers can follow the food from farm to plate.





This TECHNOLOGY IS already IN use in a club in Barcelona. Clients doesn’t need to take a wallet or a purse; they pay with a microchip implanted in the arm offers by the club.





Another method which will be USED in the supermarkets is the Iris recognition and the fingerprint.





The advantages are paying swiftly and help to prevent card or identity fraud and mugging. Also used to help to combat drug counterfeiting.





A research released has been done by the institute for grocery distribution, and we could determine that more teenagers than adults would be willing to use this TECHNOLOGY, certainly because they ARE less WORRYING about protecting THEIR privacy.


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Regds,





Venkat
Reply:Can I use a Microchip, and just wave my arm, and you'll be gone??
Reply:FOR the mistakes?


In THE immediate


SHOPPERS


GOODS





I got fed up after that
Reply:use the spell checker,and thje syntax grammar , complete the full sentence, the paragraphs read as though master yoda contructed them, otherwise, like it i do.
Reply:I'm not sure what kind of essay you're supposed to be writing, so I'll give you some general hints:





1) Watch your spelling and grammar. In the first sentence, "shopper" should be "shoppers". "An" immediate future should be "the" immediate future. After the word identity, you might want to say "such as bank and payment information". Then you should start a new sentence, "Each chip has a 10-digit code."





2) Leave out "Incredible!". It may be proper for an article, but not for an essay. It's not a complete sentence. Leave out the "But" in the next sentence. Check to make sure you're using "process" instead of "proceed".





3) The sentences beginning with "Another method" and "The advantages" should be ONE paragraph.





4) The last paragraph is a complete mess. It has an easy fix: read it aloud and make the changes where it doesn't make sense.





Good luck!
Reply:Okay, here is my take on your essay...





In the foreseeable future, shoppers could buy goods with just a wave of the arm.


Indeed, a microchip will be injected in the arm and it will contain information about identity, bank details, payment method, etc. Each chip will have a ten-digit code.





Incredible! But this procedure has already been used in cats, dogs and horses or in cattle and sheep. Consumers are able to follow the food from the farm straight to their plate.


This procedure is already in use at a club in Barcelona, where clients do not need to carry a wallet or a purse; they pay with a microchip implanted in their arm, courtesy of the club.





Another method which will be used in the supermarkets is the "iris recognition" and the "fingerprint scan".





The advantages include paying swiftly and preventing card or identity fraud, and mugging. It could also be used to combat drug counterfeiting.





A recent research by the Institute for Grocery Distribution, states that teenagers would be more willing than adults to adopt this procedure, as the latter worry more about privacy protection.