Nathalie meet Julie in the street, she hadn’t see her for a long time…
N: I Julie, what a surprise, that’s a long time!
J: Hey Nathalie, how are you?
N: I’m fine and you?
J: Yes fine thank you!
N: I think that you made studies of marketing... what do you do now?
J: Yes, it’s true! Now I’m a market analyst and I work for a famous computer company
N: Market analyst?
J: Yes, a market analyst collects and analyzes data to evaluate existing and potential product and service markets. It is their responsibility to identify and monitor competitors and research market conditions or changes in the industry that may affect sales.
N: That’s seemed to be amazing!
J: yes, I love my job! And you what do you do now? Always medicine?
N: No, I have change; I have studied public relations, now I have an employment in a marketing consultancy.
J: It’s a big change! What is it precisely?
N: It’s a business which specializes in giving advices and support to companies about marketing and markets.
J: That’s great, what do you have like activities for the moment?
N: We work for a big project for a cosmetic company which would like to introduce a new product.
J: Could you tell me about it or it's a secret?
N: No I can’t but I can explain you the most important point we have to studies!
J: Yes, That interests me!
N: Good, first thing to study is the product
J: Goods and services
N: Yes, that it, the second most important area is place
J: The distribution?
N: Yes, the activity of moving goods from the producer to the consumer, after we have Process.
J: What does it mean?
N: It’s the interaction between people and systems at all stage
J: Ok, I see and what else?
N: Physical evidence, promotion and people.
J: Promotion and people I see but what does physical evidence mean?
N: This means any visual presence or signs suggesting the company.
J: Ok I see
N: I speak, I speak but what about you? Do you like your job?
J: Yes, it’s a very interesting job, at the moment I study the evolution of the portable computer on the market because my company want to introduce a new range of portable computer.
N: Ho! Could you tell me about this new range?
J: No sorry, I can’t
N: Oh…ok…I understand
J: and if we continue this discusion at the restaurant?
N: Good idea, let’s go
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Could you tell me please if there are any mistakes? Thank you?
N: Hi Julie, what a surprise, its a long time!
J: Hey Nathalie, how are you?
N: I’m fine and you?
J: Yes fine thank you!
N: Did you finish your course on Marketing... what do you do now?
J: Yes I did %26amp; Now I’m a market analyst and I work for a famous computer company
N: Market analyst?
J: Yes, a market analyst collects and analyzes data to evaluate existing and potential product and service markets. It is their responsibility to identify and monitor competitors and research market conditions or changes in the industry that may affect sales.
N: That’s seemed to be amazing!
J: yes, I love my job! And you what do you do now? Are you still doing medicine?
N: No, I decided on a career change, I have studied public relations, now I have a job in a marketing consultancy.
J: It’s a big change! What is it precisely?
N: It’s a business which specializes in giving advices and support to companies about marketing and markets.
J: That’s great, what do you have like activities for the moment?
N: We work for a big project for a cosmetic company who would like to introduce a new product.
J: Could you tell me about it or it's a secret?
N: No I can’t but I can explain to you the most important point we have to studies!
J: That sounds interesting tell me more
N: Ok, first thing to study is the product
J: Goods and services
N: Yes, thats it, the second most important area is distribution
J: Distribution?
N: Yes, the activity of moving goods from the producer to the consumer, after we have Process.
J: What does it mean?
N: It’s the interaction between people and systems at all stage
J: Ok, I see and what else?
N: Physical evidence, promotion and people.
J: Promotion and people I see but what does physical evidence mean?
N: This means any visual presence or signs suggesting the company.
J: Ok I see
N: Well thats enough about my job, what about yours, Do you like your job?
J: Yes, it’s a very interesting job, at the moment I study the evolution of the portable computer on the market because my company want to introduce a new range of portable computer.
NSounds good, Could you tell me about this new range?
J: No sorry, not at the moment its a bit hush hush
N: Oh…ok…I understand
J: Hey its dinner time, how about getting something to eat
N: Good idea, let’s go
Reply:Wht chapter of your intended novel is that?
Reply:hi there! just gone through the mistakes. hope this helps.
N: Hi Julie. What a surprise! It has been a long time!
J: Hi Natalie. How are you?
N: I'm fine, and you?
J: Yes, i'm fine thank you!
N: I heard that you were made Studies Of Marketing... what do you do now?
J: Yes, its true. I'm now a Marketing Analyst and I work for a famous IT company
N: What, as a Market Analyst?
J: Yes. A market Analyst collects and analyses data so they can evaluate existing and potential product and service markets. its their sole responsibility to identify and monitor competitors and research market conditions or changes in the industry which may affect sales
N: That sounds amazing!
J: Yes. I love my job very much! As for yourself, what do you do now? do you still do Medicine?
N: Not anymore. Nowadays, I work as a management consultant
J: Wow! You've made quite a transition. What does the role entail?
N: Actually, it is a small business that specializes in offering advice and support to various companies about marketing and various markets
J: That's great! What type of activities are you having at the moment?
N: We are currently working on a large project for a cosmetic's company, of which is interested in launching a new product
J: Could you explain to me what it involves, or is it a secret?
N: No I could not. But what I can tell you is that the most important part of all this is the studies!
J: This sounds interesting. Continue with what you were saying...
N: Okay, the first thing is to study the product
J: Do you mean as in goods and services?
N: Yes, the next important stage is place
J: As in the distribution?
N: Yes. This is the process where goods are being moved from the producer to the consumer. after that, it is onwards with the process
J: What does this involve?
N: It is the interaction that takes place throughout the stages between people and systems
J: I see
N: What about you? Do you like your job?
J: Yes, it is very interesting so to speak. At the moment, i am studying the evolution of the laptop computer on the market. seeing as the company that i work for wants to introduce a new range of laptops
N: Wow! Could you tell me more about this?
J: Unfortunately, I couldn't. I'm sorry.
N: I understand.
J: Would it be alright by you if we were to continue this conversation at the restaturant?
N: Yes it would. What a good idea. Let's go!
Reply:1st line- Hi Julie
4th line - Yes,
9th line - That seems amazing!
10th line - Yes, I love my job and .......?
11th line - No, I have changed. I have ....now and have a job....
13th line - giving advice (not advices)
17th line - No, I can't, but.....explain the most important points we have to study!
20th line - Goods and services?
21st line- That's it,
28th line - Promotion and people, I see, but....
31st line - I speak, but what ......
Reply:People sometimes just want the POINTS, that's why they answer your question in an unhelpful way. Good Luck.
Reply:I think its pretty good, do it!
Reply:Your homework should be your own work! And by the way, there are lots of mistakes!
Reply:Without going through the whole thing (it's too long), I noticed a lot of exclamation points ( ! ). You seem to be over using that punctuation mark.
Hi. How are you?
I'm fine, thank you.
or
Hi. How are you?
I'M FINE, THANK YOU (you nosy punk)!
The exclamation point is meant to emphasize something, or drive it home. Use it only when you need something said to sound strong. It's usually not found in general conversation.
Reply:Just exactly what is your question?
Reply:There's one in the very first line but I can't be bothered to read any further.
Reply:Don't look like you got ANY problems my sweet, everything where it should be. I'll vote for you, if you go for Prime minister. Well done xxx...wot woz the mistake then KEV
Reply:N:Julie, what a surprise, it’s been a long time!
J: Hey Nathalie, how are you?
N: I’m fine and you?
J: Yes fine thank you!
N: I remember you did marketing studies... what do you do now?
J: Yes, that’s right! Now I’m a market analyst and I work for a famous computer company.
N: Market analyst?
J: Yes, a market analyst collects and analyzes data to evaluate existing and potential product and service markets. It is their responsibility to identify and monitor competitors and research market conditions or changes in the industry that may affect sales.
N: That’s amazing!
J: Yes, I love my job! And you, what do you do now? \Still in medicine?
N: No, I have changed; I study public relations now, i'm employed with a marketing consultancy.
J: It’s a big change! What is it precisely?
N: It’s a business which specializes in giving advices and support to companies about marketing and markets.
J: That’s great, what do you do at the moment?
N: I'm doing a big project for a cosmetic company which would like to introduce a new product.
J: Could you tell me about it or it's is it a secret?
N: No I can’t but I can explain the most important points to you!
J: Yes, That’s interesting.
N: Good, first we study product.
J: Goods and services
N: Yes, that’s right . The second most important area is place
J: The distribution?
N: Yes, the activity of moving goods from the producer to the consumer, after we have Processed.
J: What does that mean?
N: It’s the interaction between people and systems at all stages.
J: Ok, I see and what else?
N: Physical evidence, promotion and people.
J: Promotion and people, I see, but what does physical evidence mean?
N: This means any visual presence or signs that represent the company.
J: Ok I see.
N:But what about you? Do you like your job?
J: Yes, it’s a very interesting job, at the moment I study the evolution of the portable computer on the market because my company want to introduce a new range of portable computer.
N: Oh! Could you tell me about this new range?
J: No sorry, I can’t.
N: Oh…ok…I understand.
J:Can we continue this discussion at the restaurant?
N: Good idea, let’s go
Reply:n:Julie! What a surprise. It's been a long time.
n: I think you studied marketing. What do you do now?
n: That sounds amazing!
j: Yes, I love my job! And what are you doing now? Still studying medicine?
No, I have changed. I studied public relations, now I have a job in a marketing consultancy firm/company.
That's a big change. What is marketing consultancy, precisely?
It’s a business which specializes in giving advice and support to companies about marketing and markets.
That’s great, what are you working on at the moment?
We are working on a big project for a cosmetic company which is going to introduce a new product.
Sigh...can somebody else take it from here?
Reply:hat'soff to your effort.but its too long.
Reply:Only one mistake here as far as I can see!!! Jeez......
Reply:There are a couple of spelling mistakes, a lot of grammar mistakes, it's written in en_US (American English), and it sounds very clinical. I'd go into specifics, but I'm sure Yahoo! Answers isn't a free translation / proofreading service :)
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